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From Muspelheim to Niflheim (I and II)
Contributed by
Xnoybis
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Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:54:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I - Muspelheim - The Land of Fire
Fires raging
Flame rivers flow
Scourging everything
Overran below
The sky is dark
With ash and smoke
Blankets the land
In a long flowing cloak
Chared dead trees
Point to the sky
Like skeletal fingers
Set to defy
The ground is gray
With bones of the dead
Of those who dared brave
This Fire Godhead
II - Niflheim - The Land of Ice
Everything entombed
In great displays of Ice
Shards shine like diamonds
Set to entice
The sky is gray
Solemn and stark
And has swallowed the souls
Of many bear-sarks
Huge mountains reach
To the void in the sky
Embrace mighty rock
To cast down like die
The ground is frozen
Encasing souls of dead
Of those who dared brave
This Ice Godhead
Copyright ©
Xnoybis
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2005-01-30 01:54:38]
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Re: From Muspelheim to Niflheim (I and II)
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 07:19:37 PM AEST
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Good imagery..
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Re: From Muspelheim to Niflheim (I and II)
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by chefhmboyrd on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 04:46:53 PM AEST
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| I love the Fire and Ice comparison. Great visuals |
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Re: From Muspelheim to Niflheim (I and II)
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 09:42:56 PM AEST
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That is awesome how you had the ice poem and the fire poem right there. Great way to compare... poem to poem. Nice everything in here. These were all around great writes...
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