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despression
Contributed by
maxi_waxi
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Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:39:33 AM in AEST
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Sadness asks, "When will I be happy?"
Depression cries, "There is no happiness."
Sadness asks, "Will I ever laugh again?"
Depression cries, "There is no laughter."
Sadness asks, "Why can't I smile anymore?"
Depression cries, "I know no smiles."
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Re: despression
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:48:22 AM AEST
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| If you kept going on this and then had some kind of twisted ending it would have been alot better, Good start though ;) |
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Re: despression
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:40:01 PM AEST
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Perhap a bit more on the end...to really leave a thought going.
Sadness should ask the question .
"Have you ever tried ?"
Hardest thing about Depression and sadness is admitting that its for real.
Nice write.
Whisper
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