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The Untitled End
Contributed by
raven
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 11:54:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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When it all ends, where do you go? What do you do? I try to go on but with each new day that comes i die more. I just want to be free. This grip you have on my heart, please let go. If you ever think of me, in your mind make me happy. Atleast i can have it there. These words are the only thing getting me through. Noone seems to understand and all it has broughten was wars and running away. Do you see whats happening to me? The bottle is almost full...
All you wanted i guess wasnt me. All your time was wasted and im wasting away. I hope when you sleep you can always grasp something tight. When i sleep i grasp thoughts of death and the blade in my hand, thinking and thinking, pondering the end.
It all hurts so bad. Do you understand? Does anyone understand? Why? Ive made my last apology and my last wish still is awaiting being answered. Now that its all over i often think why did it even start? I just want to go home.........
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Re: The Untitled End
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by Ravensfire on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:45:47 PM AEST
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| Raven, very emotional and heartbreaking, you have expressed your pain straight to my soul. |
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Re: The Untitled End
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by noone on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:02:08 PM AEST
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A very emotional poem. It is well written and i can feel all the emotions you put into it by just reading it once, well done. Keep writing!
Kisrty xx |
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