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Tarnished Crucifix
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 11:44:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Tarnished Crucifix
The chains cover my hands
A sharp contrast to the paleness
The silver is rusting
And my veins are infected
The silver that's tarnished
Blackens my paleness
Leaving indication of placement
And unable to be washed away
I have enslaved myself
With these metal bands
I have lost my reason
Restrained by faith
I let the chains slip off my wrists
And fall into the clear water
That is slowly tainted by blood
But the crucifix drowns untouched
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essentially9
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2005-01-29 23:44:03]
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Re: Tarnished Crucifix
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:13:14 AM AEST
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| The only comment I can give is you are perfect |
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Re: Tarnished Crucifix
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by subchild on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:22:06 AM AEST
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| Beautiful and dark..Sweet write. |
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Re: Tarnished Crucifix
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:41:22 AM AEST
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Im all out off compliments so...Great write
Hmph... Really though you and amazing talent. |
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Re: Tarnished Crucifix
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by killingmehslowly on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:30:42 AM AEST
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| excellent...*Envies your talent* ... ...*worships* lol, but seriously, you're amazing. |
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