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The King?
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 10:29:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The king you say you are, how noble!
Sitting high upon your throne.
Enjoying judging others words
because of things you don't condone.
Is it you who passes out the ones?
Before you go and slam me down,
hear me out a bit.
I too will admit and take blame,
we can all be hypocrites.
But what makes you so special brother?
Such an expert on things.
What hurt you in the light my friend?
That sent you to the dark to sing.
I've viewed your pictures,
but I don't understand.
Why so many photos of yourself?
You seem an ordinary man.
Maybe you dream to be discovered.
Become a male supermodel some day!
It doesn't take brains to sell yourself.
Whatever your into brother, that's okay.
Ya see I tend to think too damn much.
Try to figure folks out.
Tend to get a lot of vibes, one might say.
Comtemplating heavily why folks tick a certain way.
Some would say none of your business.
Some might want to talk and share.
Others simply don't give a damn.
DO YOU DARE?
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Re: The King?
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by Ravensfire on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 10:33:17 PM AEST
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| Even if you did **** this person off hopefully he'll get the message. |
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Re: The King?
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:30:56 AM AEST
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| dare, i always thought that was an interesting concept. worry about yourself, everyone else matters on if you let them. |
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Re: The King?
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:26:18 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed this poem! Good job! TD |
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Re: The King?
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by poorgirl on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 07:24:08 AM AEST
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| I find it very sad that you even wrote this..Out of over a thousand members here you worry about one person..Why does it matter to you? Seems very wasted that you would bother placing a dare over what a person's pictures..Poem's,Comments..Trust me sweetheart,most poem's here are not good..And if ppl cannot take negative comments then they need not apply..Good to see your one of the people who lives for other ppl.. |
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Re: The King?
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by subchild on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 07:47:48 AM AEST
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It's funny cause most know who you speak of..Your upset cause of his pictures..Wtf..His poems..Why? Do you have this much insecurity?
You think he needs attention.Do you have a clue how well off he is here in Georgia..So before you post about someone else and feel it funny,insecurity,jealous,Never knock someone I am this close to in my life.. |
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Re: The King?
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 10:42:51 AM AEST
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| A very good, and very APPROPRIATE write, considerring the focus person. |
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Re: The King?
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:55:24 AM AEST
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| heh, I find him to be a very nice person and I don't think he ever referred to himself as a king. Like poorgirl said, there are alot of bad writers here and I feel they deserve the feedback they get from him. If they aren't strong enough to take it, why post? stop living for others and hone your OWN talent, then maybe what you'll get from him will be positive since you seem to care so much about what one person thinks. This won't tick him off, he'll laugh at you. |
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Re: The King?
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:18:58 PM AEST
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| Several of you folks ask me why I care. Because I am human. Constructive criticism is okay, meanness is not necessary. And if its ok for some to put down writes about other folks, then why are you hasseling me. And no this person never called himself a king, that's called wordplay. One of his not so nice comments he told someone he would step down off his throne. By the way he's never given me a negative comment. And you mean people the damn dare is DO YOU DARE to give a damn what other people think. Wow I love this, I knew this would get some sparks, never imagine you folks would get so hot. It's just words right, thoughts, expressions. I'm laughing too. Seems the dark folks do have some feelings. Peace to you all. Laura |
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Re: The King?
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:07:07 PM AEST
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| I made the mistake of telling him he was handsome..now why did I do that? I'm insecure myself and try to give others a boost when I can..women as well as men. I've taken hits from him on my poetry and they are unkind ..he makes mistakes also..and no one ever tells him.. his looks will fade one day.. he treats young people too harshly and women flock to him because of his looks..not his writing ability..I don't blame you for being angry.. he's still young and thinks he can write.. LOL.. wait until a really good editor gets ahold of his work.. his ego will deflate along with..well. rotflmao.. |
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Re: The King?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:59:37 PM AEST
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| Hell I liked him before I knew what he looked like,his poems are what grabbed me and true he is a stunning gorgeous mf,I would do him while he read one of his poems to me.Anyways he is a superb writer,he is great and deserves to be put on a thrown.Soo do you dare to be as good as him?! Hmmm do'nt hate appreciate. |
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Re: The King?
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:47:22 AM AEST
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Well, it's said that the object of poetry is to move the readers....
seems to me you've moved quite a few. lol
A great venting my friend
I don't know who you're addressing this too,
but a great venting none the less.
Roses
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Re: The King?
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 09:15:56 PM AEST
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Great poem.
Scott |
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Re: The King?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 04:13:56 AM AEST
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| Interesting. I never knew there was a 'throneroom' in here . . . |
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Re: The King?
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by fuzzywuzzy on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:47:56 AM AEST
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| hehehe I just stumbled in here by accident..the best thing about this was rakermans comment..'cause it's true..you moved people..and 2nd..someone's comment about a THRONE ROOM..isn't that a bathroom..let someone be king if he wants to.. that's what I say.. hehehehe.. get plenty of magazines with pix in them and let whoever it is reign away.. lol |
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Re: The King?
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by Rhymingron on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 04:55:19 PM AEST
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| I don't know who this is about but it's a very good write. |
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