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Lies
Contributed by
essentially9
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 10:28:17 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Lies
The death of a dove
Is causing the end of love
Lies weren't enough
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-01-29 22:28:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lies
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 10:43:08 PM AEST (User
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Complete and perfect..You are one the best. |
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Re: Lies
(User Rating: 1 ) by N0body on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:07:34 AM AEST (User
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Small...but deep. Nice. |
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Re: Lies
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 03:58:31 AM AEST (User
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Perfectly done..:-) venkat |
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