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With my life
Contributed by
setting_in_the_sun
on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 05:50:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Water forms in eyes,
from those days gone by,
that I sit and ponder...
through memories.
How could you have possibly,
done that to- me.
Your one and only,
I'm shattered and alone.
It started off, a simple crush,
we held hands,
we just cuddled-
and all that mushy stuff,
We had copious fights...
but we made up at night,
with the kissing, and snuggling,
your arms so secure.
We'd talk, and we'd laugh,
we only needed one another,
and we realized that moment,
we were in love with each other.
The brilliance in your eyes...
you said my smile was as bright,
as the beautiful stars in the sky...
but in that same moment it dimmed.
You told me that you were too attached,
and you didn't want to stay...
even though our souls were a match,
you left me.
We'd still hang out... but it hurt me inside,
I'd smile and laugh- but it was denial.
You were there with my best friend...
and still had nerve to look in my eyes.
I decided I'd be better to just leave you,
I decided, I wouldn't try and see you,
I made choice to put the past behind me,
but with a love- how can you just forget.
I'd spend nights in my room with the stereo
blasting- and being alone I'd wonder why...
I shouldn't be here stuck in depression,
crying over the love lost of one guy-
who didn't want to spend with me his time...
and I'm hoping, that soon I'm able to move on,
with my life...
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Re: With my life
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by noone on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 05:53:29 PM AEST
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| this is a really good poem, well done!!!! keep writing. |
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Re: With my life
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 06:44:58 PM AEST
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| Not bad..Had good feelings involved. |
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Re: With my life
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by breny on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 07:52:45 PM AEST
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that feeling is too familiar to me. good write :-D
~Bren~ |
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Re: With my life
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by B-Randy on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 08:12:33 PM AEST
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| I'd be lying if I said that your poem doesn't hit close to home. You just have to remember that you can have just as good of a time without guys like that to hold you down. You should go out with a close group of friends, cut up, flirt, and have a good time. He'll see what a good thing he's lost. |
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Re: With my life
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by CurtisC on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 08:35:46 PM AEST
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I'm kinda goin through the same thing right now so this poem really hits close to home for me. excellent write, i really enjoyed it.
Curtis |
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