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Dark
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 05:12:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dark
Untill A spark
Lites a flame
Glowing
Untill rain
Extinguishes the flame
Cold
Untill another spark
Does the same
Dark
Never another spark
Then comes the day
But
Soon
All light fades
Away
Away into the night
Awaiting
Another Day
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-01-29 17:12:35]
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Re: Dark
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 05:15:18 PM AEST
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| Good and strong write.. |
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Re: Dark
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by Gimpie on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 05:45:35 PM AEST
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| this is good, I loved the way you wrote it. |
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Re: Dark
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by lilschizoboy07 on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 06:43:32 PM AEST
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Love, grief, loneliness: life in anutshell, mate.
Didn't mean to be depressing. Top hole, wotwot! Go on flowing! |
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Re: Dark
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 11:51:58 PM AEST
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| style is everything. and all of yours seem to work for you. |
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