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Hating Life
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 04:22:41 PM in AEST
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YOU HATE YOUR LIFE
I hate mine too
YOU THINK YOU'RE UGLY
I think I am too
YOU FEEL UNLOVED
I feel that too
YOU WANT TO BE HAPPY
So do I
YOU HOLD BACK EVERYTHING, CAN'T SEEM TO CRY
Sometimes I cry, sometimes I hold back, you have to give it everything you have
YOU THINK THERE IS NOTHING SPECIAL ABOUT YOU
But you're wrong
IT FEELS LIKE YOU'RE IN A BAD DREAM
There is no escape
I AM STUCK IN THIS MESS
For eternity
THERE IS NO HOPE FOR ME
I think that is untrue
YOU WANT ME TO BE MYSELF
That is all you have to do
THEN I WILL BE ME AND YOU WILL BE YOU
Together we can do it
NO WONDER HOW PEOPLE EVER GET ALONG
All we have to do is stay strong
Copyright ©
UnlovedChild
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2005-01-29 16:22:41]
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Re: Hating Life
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by jjones12 on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 05:44:43 PM AEST
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Great write! u know i use to feel that way to!
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Re: Hating Life
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:37:09 AM AEST
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Amy, i can feel your anger in each line. It's very efective i liked it.
Jane x |
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