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'' WONDER'S I'VE SEEN ''
Contributed by
ravensfire
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:22:12 PM in AEST
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The wonder's I've seen in my 46th year, The hope's and the cure's bring my eye's to tear. In an age of miracle's and sight's to behold, The future it seem's is for the bold. Today's technology bound's at the speed of light, The dream's of tomorrow are within our sight. Space travel, Time travel? digital this and that, Mankind searches for all the fact's. Peace and kindness are in our hand's, The love of god through out the land. Brother's and Sister's hear what I say, It was said in the 60's love is the way.
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2005-01-29 14:22:12]
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Re: '' WONDER'S I'VE SEEN ''
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by TheRaven on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:41:42 PM AEST
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what a cool poem. great job. also love the name
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Re: '' WONDER'S I'VE SEEN ''
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 05:42:37 PM AEST
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| I would like to see it in stanzas..or lines..but I loved the flow and the mention of the 60's.. free love.LOL nothing free about it..everybody paid something..hahahaha but those VW bugs..how cool was that..??? |
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Re: '' WONDER'S I'VE SEEN ''
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 08:04:31 PM AEST
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| Right on my brother! Great write. Much peace to you. Laura |
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