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please forgive me

Contributed by in2thetwilightzone2 on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:18:48 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

please forgive me if i acted a little strange,
please forgive me for thinking out loud,
please forgive me for being such a fool,
please forgive me if thats how it sounds,

please let me justify,
my case was as thin as ice,
i had no point or evidence,
just blind eyes,
sarah can you forgive me?
you did nothing wrong,
i should have been there,
should have been your backbone,
should have helped you to be strong,

i made myself look nasty,
look like my loneliness was my home,
but please forgive me,
i dont want to be alone,
wish i could turn back time,
rub the words off of Gods script,
and write new lines,
i wish i could have caught the water,
before it dropped and dripped,
it meant nothing,
everything i said were signs,
my words were not apt,
just meaningless lies,
you have a right to be angry,
im not stopping you at all,
but it makes me feel so stupid,
it makes me feel so small,
sarah please forgive me,
sarah please forgive me,
sarah please for give me...

it was jordan who did this aswell, he pretended to me that he wasnt talking to you, and he *****ed about you and said so many horrible things about you and made up lies, when ever his phone rang (whilst i was on his other phone) when it was you, hed say "oh im not answering it its ***** child!" and he would say ***** about you. then deny it to your face. he played us off against each other. dirty dog. lets ***** him up!!!!!!!!!!!!! GO US!!

Copyright © in2thetwilightzone2 ... [ 2005-01-29 14:18:48]
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Re: please forgive me (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 05:45:20 PM AEST
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too many jordans and not enough time.. Dani told me when I did this..that I was ranting and not writing poetry.. she was baaaaad..LOL but she was right..

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