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Upon the Ocean I'll Stay*
Contributed by
Glo
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:09:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Upon this Sail Boat I'll stay,
Till the winds of love...
Blow you forever my way.
Come Hell or High Water,
As the Sun shines high above.
Till the darkest nights...
With the fullest Moon
Morning doesn't have to come to soon,
Till you come back to me...
In love with you forever and always,
Here is where I'll stay.
The Ocean is a friend of mine.
He understands my plight...
Keeping me good company,
All day and through the night.
Sometimes he rocks me to sleep,
In his arms of Ocean Blue,
Sea Foam to rest my head upon...
To cushion my head while I dream.
Having you next to me...
Is all too real... it seems.
Awakened by the Laughing Gulls
Drifting high above...
Could they be mocking me?
As I sit with hopes of you...My Love?
Here is where I need to be,
Here is where I'll stay.
Waiting upon your return...
With the Ocean and all it's Sea People,
Faithfully keeping me company.
Sailing upon the Ocean Blue...
Until you come back to me.
Waiting for your return!
~Gloria E. 02-October-2004
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Glo
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2005-01-29 14:09:56]
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Re: Upon the Ocean I'll Stay*
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:16:13 PM AEST
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Awakened by the Laughing Gulls
Drifting high above...
Could they be mocking me?
I really, really liked this line..I could visualize it.. |
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Re: Upon the Ocean I'll Stay*
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by TheRaven on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:47:14 PM AEST
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very sweet....love the imagery as well, so vivid. loved these lines...
Till the darkest nights...
With the fullest Moon
Morning doesn't have to come to soon,
Till you come back to me...
In love with you forever and always,
Here is where I'll stay.
i always feel like this when i have to depart from my g/f at night. thanks for putting it into words so beautifully....
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Re: Upon the Ocean I'll Stay*
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 06:02:33 PM AEST
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Loved this Glo..... well done!!
Jenni |
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