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Forbidden Love III: A Terrible Dream

Contributed by eternalnight4x on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 11:31:11 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

This is all a dream
A terrible dream
I still feel your pain
I still hear your scream

The red fragments shatter
You collapse to the ground
The pieces they scatter
You’re blood’s all around

You clasp my hand
Look straight in my eyes
You part from this land
As you say your goodbye

I just wanted to see you smile
See your beautiful face
Be happy for awhile
But this was not the case

I held you in my arms
As you breathed your last breath
I tried to protect you from harm
But you slipped into death

“Oh what a klutz I am”
You wearily say
“I have broken the ring
You gave me that day

I treasured it always
I had kept it safe
Until this one day
When it met its fate

Forgive me my brother
I allowed it to shatter
And all the beautiful pieces
Now suddenly scatter

I love you my brother
Although it’s a forbidden love
This is the price I pay
Sent to heaven above”

She faded away
And slipped into death
What went wrong that day?
I held her last breath

Heaven, my sister
This is where you should be
But your fate is in hell
Because of your love for me

I tainted your life
And I cursed your death
I brought you much strife
Now there is nothing left

This is all a dream
A terrible dream
The ultimate nightmare
That I cannot bear

Copyright Â© eternalnight4x ... [ 2005-01-29 11:31:11]
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Re: Forbidden Love III: A Terrible Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:04:16 PM AEST
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Woah, great write!

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