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Ready To Die
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 03:48:53 AM in AEST
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I can't seem to cry
I'm just holding back
Don't want to break down
Thinking about it just makes me frown
I remember when I saw you
You really weren't all there
You missed Christmas
And he said there was always next year
But you won't be here
Because they are all giving up
They read your rights
And are leaving you to die
At least you won't have to
Suffer anymore
I hope heaven is lovely
You will be an angel with wings
So when you look down
To watch over me
I will be staring up at the sky
Smiling at you
And one thing I want you to remember
Is I will never stop loving you
Now it is your time to go
You are ready to fly away
Up to heaven you will go
Where you won't feel anymore pain
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UnlovedChild
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2005-01-29 03:48:53]
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Re: Ready To Die
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 07:42:40 AM AEST
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Amy this is such a sad write, im sorry if your going thru this.
Im sad to hear this news about your Aunt, if you need to talk you'll know where to get me.
*Hugs*
Jane xx |
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Re: Ready To Die
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:38:20 PM AEST
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| This is sad, but good. Sad poems are always good, why is that/ I think we all have problems. |
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Re: Ready To Die
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by Petznick on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:34:19 PM AEST
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good poem, really relates all the emotions that you were feeling at the time
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