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Scar Me Hard
Contributed by
Xnoybis
on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:09:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I can hear the winter winds blow
across where you used to lay
I can still hear the echoes of
The things you used to say
I can still see the shadow of your face
In the mirror when I pass
And I can still see you coming home
Inside the front room's glass
I swear I hear you laughing
When something funny comes to mind
And I swear I hear you crying
Down the hall, and from behind
I insist I feel your sadness
When I come home, feeling blue
And I know I feel you when I'm sleeping
It could be nobody else but you
But all of these things mean nothing
They're gone and in the past
Just shadows of a troubled mind
They tell me nothing lasts.
Copyright ©
Xnoybis
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2005-01-29 02:09:26]
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Re: Scar Me Hard
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by poeteeza on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:15:50 AM AEST
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Nicely written, flowed very smoothly.
Moving.... |
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Re: Scar Me Hard
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:21:24 AM AEST
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| This was awesome. Cheers! |
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Re: Scar Me Hard
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by n2dep2care on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 05:53:13 PM AEST
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Effective and stirring- very nice piece.
Laurie |
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