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Fallen
Contributed by
clementine
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 12:35:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There's a gun outside.
A gun outside.
The blood streams like the tears I've cried.
I know it's wrong of me to dance across that line,
but what's the point when reason conflicts with rhyme
I've grown to depend on the stains on my hands.
Once foreshadowed in the prominent land.
But this was never my plan,
it was never my plan.
Visionaries ******* blinded adversaries.
Dredging fears equipped with disheartening blatancy.
I found myself depending on dependency.
Insanity inanely mixed with complete lunacy.
And it still wasn't my plan
to fall against these hands.
Forgive me for my daydreaming insecurity.
I've forsaken everything I ever believed in believing
in order to achieve this complete solidarity.
I'm done being clean.
I'm done being me.
Copyright ©
clementine
... [
2005-01-29 00:35:58]
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Re: Fallen
(User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 11:45:44 AM AEST
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| well expressed write, well written. keep it up |
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Re: Fallen
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 07:08:23 PM AEST
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| Awesome write..This is I think the first of yours I read and I really like your style. |
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