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Broken Glass
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raven
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Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:39:00 PM in AEST
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Ah, the fresh summer breeze. I cant wait untill nightfall. To see the glory and all its might, to be reminded of the times that made me happy, to make a last wish on my favorite star. Dinner ends. Time to get my last wish, she owes me.
Gazing at the night sky, where are the stars? Where is the hope, the light, my last chance? I just want to make things right but my heart is under a blockade. I try to look up but all i see is the blackest black. They came at just that moment almost like they were meant to stop me. Maybe everything is not as it seems, if i stay i might see them.
Hours passed....still no stars. All the pain, the torment, broken promisses and a broken heart cant i make one more? Cant take this pain anymore. This machine i created is dying.
I take my last rest, the clouds disappear....
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Re: Broken Glass
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by Keila on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:42:36 PM AEST
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"take my last rest, the clouds disappear"
death is not the solution to anything, but stupidity. |
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Re: Broken Glass
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 12:15:20 AM AEST
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| very sad. |
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