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Island of Hope in a Sea of Darkness
Contributed by
raven
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Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:35:29 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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If only one day i could hold you again my life would rest complete. I would have the soundest sleep never again to weep. Still reach for your hand but the touch is cold. The thought engulfs my mind that we are through. It will never continue and if you offered the bet again i would have to fold...
You used to lead me everywhere. I guess i only got lost in the allusion to your heart. Like walking through the desert but instead of water i needed the truth.
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2005-01-28 23:35:29]
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Re: Island of Hope in a Sea of Darkness
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by Keila on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:39:57 PM AEST
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T-T it is sad that such things can make us sad dependence is a crappy thing
but it is all gravy while it lasts
_this is a nice write_ |
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Re: Island of Hope in a Sea of Darkness
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by DayDreamer64 on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 03:59:35 PM AEST
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That was really sad and beautiful at the same time. I really loved this poem. I'll try and get some of my own friends to read it. Thia was truely a touching poem.
~*DayDreamer64*~/ |
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