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Enter My Broken World
Contributed by
UnfallenTears
on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:58:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Watch and listen
As I shake and shatter your reality
Enter my broken world
I defy the definition of normal
Tears don't mean sadness
And blood doesn't mean death
Hold on as the world beneath you spins
And the walls fade away
Leaving you to experience an unkown world
Of strange realities and famous secrets
Remember former days as you fade away
As you dissolve into mental absorbtion
I defy the definition of normal
Tears don't mean sadness
And blood doesn't mean death
Watch and listen
As I shake and shatter your reality
Enter my broken world
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2005-01-28 22:58:45]
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Re: Enter My Broken World
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 12:32:20 AM AEST
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| ahah, but i bring the superglue to fix it. =] |
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Re: Enter My Broken World
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by FlintHunter on
Thursday, 1st September 2011 @ 10:15:25 AM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem. I especially like how you bring back some of the earlier lines and restate them at the end. Great title! Keep writing! |
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