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Crimson Fantasies II: I am...
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:23:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am the hate that courses within you,
Seething, blinding, white-hot rage...
Consuming you, feeding on you, killing you...
I am the darkness that haunts your dreams,
Casting shadowy monstrosities,
Forming your worst nightmares...
Red eyes gleaming, fangs shine in the moonlight,
Death has knocked, and entered...
Your time is near its end...
I am the desire that sleeps within you,
Lingering for the right moment,
To stir, open my jaws, and howl...
The beast reels its head,
And Pleasure licks her lips...
Temptress of the night,
Mistress of pleasure and pain...
Ah, such a sweet Melodie, your agonizing screams...
I am the weaver of your crimson fantasies,
Your hidden desire...
Locked deep within your mind,
Incessantly teasing,
The one thing you can't have,
Driving you insane...
I hear your heart throbbing against my resonant chest,
Echoing eternally,
Through the vast void where my heart used to be...
I am the soul-less, the heartless, the perpetual obscurity,
That inhabits your essence, your very being...
The satisfaction to your lust,
The ending of your cravings...
I lend my lips to you,
I sacrifice my body to you,
For the sake of passion...
I am Seduction, I am Beauty, I am Blood Flower...
Your end, and your new beginning...
Succumb to moments by moonlight,
Whisper my name, rekindle a dying fire,
Give into my charm and feather-like touch...
Let me make your crimson fantasies come true,
Fly with me on ebony silk wings,
And enter my realm of never-ending darkness...
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-01-28 22:23:56]
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Re: Crimson Fantasies II: I am...
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by afterdark on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:32:27 PM AEST
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| Amazing write..You hit the dark night so perfect..This should be a very ood thing to ppl..However most never explore their dark side. Your poem is well done here. |
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Re: Crimson Fantasies II: I am...
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:12:22 PM AEST
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this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
good ..I explored my dark side and it was ..well it went
down stairs and had whips and .. positions and hatred and things I liked and didn't like..both desires and passions..but also rage this poem is beautiful.. |
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Re: Crimson Fantasies II: I am...
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 12:56:21 AM AEST
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| I have to say this is one of the best dark writes i have ever read.awsome amazing. |
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Re: Crimson Fantasies II: I am...
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 10:48:46 AM AEST
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I am Seduction, I am Beauty, I am Blood Flower...
Your end, and your new beginning...
Succumb to moments by moonlight,
Whisper my name, rekindle a dying fire,
Give into my charm and feather-like touch...
Let me make your crimson fantasies come true,
Fly with me on ebony silk wings,
And enter my realm of never-ending darkness...
Very powerful words. Although dark it had words of softness and a delicacy weaved in dark verse
Superb write as always
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: Crimson Fantasies II: I am...
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:02:31 PM AEST
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* begins whispering ... wonders if the voice can be heard *
A stunning entry. Passion, power, and classic Fleurdesang. Even the unwilling would find these words ... this chant, the invite ... impossible to ignore.
* applause *
Nazmythian ~ |
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