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My Truth, How It Hurts!
Contributed by
o7neves
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Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:23:55 PM in AEST
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I stare and admire her from afar
Never did I think she’d be the one to leave a scar
The love I feel for her is definitely rare
It was to her in which my soul I did bare
I can’t believe, she had me so open
That’s really not something, I do often
As long as she’s happy, then I am too
Who the hell am I kidding, that’s just not true
She really thinks she knows how I feel
But she only knows a part of it, not the whole deal
It sucks how caught up, I am with her
Every time she touches me, she makes my heart sore
Because she’s the one, that I cannot have
And when she mentions someone else, it’s my heart that she stabs
But how could she know cuz I hold it all inside
I keep myself going, by thinking all in due time
I know we won’t ever be, yet still hold on to hope
When I finally had accepted the fact, all I did was mope
At least we are, very good friends
I wonder if that’s enough, to help my heart mend
So there you have it, this is my truth
As I come to terms with it, sitting on my stoop
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Re: My Truth, How It Hurts!
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:21:50 PM AEST
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I really like this..two lines in particular..
#1. I know we won’t ever be, yet still hold on to hope
#2.As I come to terms with it, sitting on my stoop
It says what is in my heart.. of course I don't have a stoop..but when I think of it..I do stoop in my posture..LOL.. |
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Re: My Truth, How It Hurts!
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:23:37 PM AEST
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This is a great write. Keep on holding on to hope. That's what keeps us going.
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Re: My Truth, How It Hurts!
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by jjones12 on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:52:16 PM AEST
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Great write!!!!
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Re: My Truth, How It Hurts!
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by Dec2three198five on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 01:31:17 AM AEST
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| I like this poem. I love espically the line that says "I know we won't ever be, yet still hold on to hope." that one line describes what i'm going through right now. lol 33 |
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Re: My Truth, How It Hurts!
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by LaDyD on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:11:03 AM AEST
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| that's the way i feel for someone right now =/ but yea who u talkin about julie??? |
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Re: My Truth, How It Hurts!
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by Evilcaf on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 01:13:54 PM AEST
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| nice write hun, i've given up on my love now lol. hurts worse then ever but hey my choice luv caf xxx |
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by vasfynestdyme0 on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 09:09:06 PM AEST
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| I can really relate to how you're feeling in this poem...I think it's really good |
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Re: My Truth, How It Hurts!
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:55:11 AM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: My Truth, How It Hurts!
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:20:20 AM AEST
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wow....you've captured everything here! I'm really sorry things never really worked out the way you wanted things to with her, i know how much she means to you :) hang in there girl, life can only get better...
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Re: My Truth, How It Hurts!
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by O7NeVeS on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 09:45:05 PM AEST
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| I JUST FOUND OUT THAT THIS POEM IS GOING TO GET PUBLISHED!!!!!! TANYA |
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by chanceof_promise on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 08:37:35 PM AEST
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this is how i feel..
me and my boyfriend just broke up a few weeks ago.. and the line
And when she mentions someone else, it’s my heart that she stabs
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