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Unholy Glow
Contributed by
dream_protector_bp
on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:05:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Nights like these
Cold and chilled
Frigid frost
Feeling lost.
Night is worst,
My feelings flow,
By the light of the moon,
The unholy glow.
Consider my thoughts,
The shiver in my spine,
The broken hearts,
The feeling divine.
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2005-01-28 19:05:45]
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Re: Unholy Glow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:20:46 PM AEST
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| Excellent write. Great flow and imagery. Congratulations on getting published. :-) |
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Re: Unholy Glow
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:39:15 PM AEST
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I feel something deep with this poem nice job and concrats
Michelle |
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Re: Unholy Glow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:59:49 PM AEST
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| Congratulations on getting published! A short but very good poem. Cheers! |
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Re: Unholy Glow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:31:08 PM AEST
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Succinct, although I would have preferred if you had kept to the three syllable intro as per the first two.
Congrats. and welcome . . . |
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