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White Rose
Contributed by
ramfire
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Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 01:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A rose is growing close to my front door,
‘tis white with petals folded inward seen.
A lonesome flower wearing nothing more
than thorns well placed amid its leaves of green.
This beauty grows in late cool autumn time
when others fade and leave behind their show.
Alas, a few short weeks will see its prime,
then passing days will be its hurtful foe.
A solitary blossom that's all white
attracts attention I'm now prone to say.
A fragrance sweet from rose is my delight
and for this essence people often pay.
Whatever, rose for me's a welcomed find,
in autumn late a nice surprise of kind.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2002-12-07 13:30:00]
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Re: White Rose
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 01:34:53 PM AEST
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hey nice poem, its sweet, hope 2 read more soon, read mine if u like.
love gem xXx |
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Re: White Rose
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by Ramfire on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 11:10:07 PM AEST
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Thank you for your kind words and good score. I hope I can write something else you'll like.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: White Rose
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by OreO on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:59:57 AM AEST
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This is beautiful ramfire, i loved the lines where it says.........a lonesome flower wearing nothing more than thorns well placed amid it's leaves of green....tha's beautiful...thanks for sharing this one it gives one a beautiful vision....
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Re: White Rose
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by Ramfire on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 09:41:35 AM AEST
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Thank you for your kind words and good score. I'm glad you like my poetry. I wrote another poem about flowers - it's somewhere on this website. Maybe you'll like that one too. It's titled, "Such Beauty". Maybe its in the month of June on the old website. I don't remember.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: White Rose
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 11:14:04 AM AEST
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Dearest Ramfire @-<-<<-
Beautiful... love your style here and as always!
Your friend always Nessa |
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Re: White Rose
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 02:16:52 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, reminds me of Hawthorne. |
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Re: White Rose
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by lilch4ever on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 12:11:36 AM AEST
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| Very good and so beautiful. |
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