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FEAR
Contributed by
hellsfallenangel
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Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 03:32:52 PM in AEST
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Ive gone to my padded room never to be heard from again
takink my pills to suppress the thoughts that haunt my dream
always running from the dark always afraid to close my eyes,
thoughts of death I am always with.
never wanting to see the day i meet him.
I have gone to that place i never wished to go.
I never want to go there again.
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hellsfallenangel
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2005-01-28 15:32:52]
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Re: FEAR
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by TaintedSoul on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 03:45:18 PM AEST
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A bad place to be and it imprints so deeply upon the mind. That's when you back out the door nice and quiet like only to run the other way! Enjoyed.
peace
TS |
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Re: FEAR
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:43:03 PM AEST
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| Deep write. It's really interesting. Good work. |
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Re: FEAR
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by karmen on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:08:54 PM AEST
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its deep and its very good
--karmen |
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Re: FEAR
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 12:05:35 PM AEST
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| wow very dark and mysterious! a good poem |
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Re: FEAR
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 10:49:17 AM AEST
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Nice write. Left me with images of Hell, the Damned and other unspeakable things! Gave me the shivers! Kudos!
Thumper ; o) |
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Re: FEAR
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by justme03 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 11:16:21 AM AEST
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great poem
awesome descriptions
i never been there...yet
but i think ill b there soon enough
its my fate..i can sense it
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