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HYPNOTIC
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 03:11:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lay back,relax,breathe
we'll do this as before
follow my lead
Hear the music,feel my beat
fingerprint my thighs,
grip me tight
scream if you need,
twist the sheet
Dig deep my sweet
Hear my whispers
Remember my scent
later dream of me
Injection of love,your in me
Loosen your grip,gently release
Lay back,relax,breathe
Copyright ©
sweetoccasion29
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2005-01-28 15:11:04]
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Re: HYPNOTIC
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by afterdark on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 03:13:21 PM AEST
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| Hmm..Considering I dig your Sister..I will be more tender with yours here. It was simple and a fair read..I felt it could have had much more graphic words used..But then again being profane I tend to like much more. |
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Re: HYPNOTIC
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 03:30:50 PM AEST
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| Sweetly and *gently* erotic. Nice going! Cheers! |
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Re: HYPNOTIC
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by jillian_phan on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 03:43:02 PM AEST
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I like it somewhat like soft *P.o.e.m.*
if you catch my drift |
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Re: HYPNOTIC
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by O7NeVeS on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:48:14 PM AEST
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| Very well written...unfortunately my poem got banned, "A Woman's Need", I guess that was too erotic...watever! Enjoyed it! TD |
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Re: HYPNOTIC
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by Sinned on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:44:52 PM AEST
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Oh ! the mind of a woman.
Beautiful write.
I hope you do more.
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