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Suicide Conflict: Warfare
Contributed by
Zaknafein8891
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Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:33:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Help me...
Don't leave me alone...
Stalking suicide,
crouched waiting for the end.
Sulking shades mock me,
knock me down.
She left me to bleed,
she can't see thet she's broken me...
...no...please don't leave...
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2005-01-28 13:33:45]
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Re: Suicide Conflict: Warfare
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:40:57 PM AEST
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| Aw. Sadly touching. Keep Writing. |
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Re: Suicide Conflict: Warfare
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by jillian_phan on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 02:12:16 PM AEST
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| i wrote the same, about a boy,.. who left me, but he ended up coming back, although i no longer felt i needed him in that way anymore... we are still friends today... read some of my poems, they are similar, although not all of them are on this site and i need to type them out too. check my name on Poetry.com there is some on there..., i think the same ones though, you know copy and paste. |
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Re: Suicide Conflict: Warfare
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by afterdark on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 02:28:08 PM AEST
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| You know romeo and juliet was a lame story as well..Why so many ppl think their wolrd is over cause some whore or some scum bag have broke their heart..It wont be the last time I hate to tell you..My pity lies nowhere around this..The coward sneaks to death; the brave live on. |
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Re: Suicide Conflict: Warfare
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 03:26:35 PM AEST
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| Sad write. We all feel this way some day or another. |
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