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Understanding
Contributed by
Willofree
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Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:52:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She sat across the table gazing at me
Her beautiful hazel eyes, sometimes blue sometimes green
Windows to her soul open and revealing
There was something sad in her demeanor
A forced smile and quivering lip
A tear ran down her cheek
I felt as though I caressed a trembling bird in my hand
So vulnerable, so apprehensive
Feeling shut out and distant from me
More tears began to flow as her fears were revealed
She experienced me as quiet and withdrawn
Avoidant, rather distant and aloof
She looked at me with soft and pleading eyes
And almost whispered her deepest hurt
She was feeling she had lost her best buddy
"I want my buddy back," she sobbed
I felt a lump in my throat
As my tears also began to spill
I felt so sorry for the lack of communication
I explained I just didn't want to hurt her
"And this doesn't hurt?", she quipped
dreadfully sorry for the misunderstanding
So I shared my inner feelings
Oh how easy it is to drift apart
But with love and care, we are back heart to heart
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2005-01-28 12:52:06]
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Re: Understanding
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:59:28 PM AEST
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Awww, this is so sweet. Yeah. The most important things are always the hardest to deal with.. but are worth it.
I am glad you are both back on track.
Beautiful write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Understanding
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:01:52 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful illustration of why communication is so important! Lovely write! Blessings. |
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Re: Understanding
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by msjroc on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:43:37 PM AEST
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| I loved this poem...and it's crazy because i just posted a poem, DAMN, and it's simliar with a twist to yours |
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Re: Understanding
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 02:28:56 PM AEST
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Wow i love this write, im glad the both of you are both on track again.
Good write and im glad i was able to read this.
Jane x |
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Re: Understanding
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 06:14:57 PM AEST
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Well now, this one brings an ocean of tears-n-happiness, so much joy that I tremble from the words. It's the masterpeice of the century as it's powerfull, full with luv-n-understanding. How can anyone not weep from it's beauty-n-power?
Luv, huggs, big smiles,
emy
HHHUUUUUmmmmm such a delicios right. |
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Re: Understanding
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 06:55:28 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written. I always enjoy reading your poetry. Much peace. Laura |
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Re: Understanding
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 10:40:41 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful..and so true.. well told... Loved this very much..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Understanding
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 06:02:54 PM AEST
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Nicely written Terry ... almost a confessional feel to it ... I really like the quite personal feel the words portray ... I'm bettin your backgrount helped alot on this write.
Nazmythian ~ |
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