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I WAS SUPPOSED TO SMILE
Contributed by
cottoncandy
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Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:17:05 PM in AEST
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I was supposed to smile,
But it just lasted a while
I was supposed to smile
But instead I cried the nile
I was supposed to smile
Someone listen
I was supposed to smile
No one's here
No one cares
No one sees
No one tries
I'm left alone
This is when I cry
This time I won't try
I won't fight the tears
I'll let them fall
Gently caressing my face
Rolling down like a race
Grieving heart, leaving a trace
Hard times I can't erase
Joy I can't bring
Bells that won't ring
Again, I was suposed to smile,
But it just lasted a while
Copyright ©
cottoncandy
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2005-01-28 12:17:05]
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Re: I WAS SUPPOSED TO SMILE
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:57:54 PM AEST
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| This is such a sad write. "No one cares, no one sees, no one tries." Well, I feel like that sometimes too but realistically speaking, no one will come and rescue you from your misery. It's kinda something you have to do yourself. Keep writing! Blessings. |
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Re: I WAS SUPPOSED TO SMILE
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by jillian_phan on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:04:52 PM AEST
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| i'm not going to say i feel like that too, to comfort you, but to let u know i do feel like that too, just so you know, but u know what i say; i say, "don't expect anything from anyone, and you won't be let down, only surprised", like that happens for me anyway, not. i think what is funny is that here is a poem like expresses my feelings for the past couple of ....so on.. and i didn't even write it... so i suppose no ones really alone, it's just a small worls with closed eyes... |
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Re: I WAS SUPPOSED TO SMILE
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:28:00 PM AEST
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Awwww. So sad..
Like Timebot said though, you need to help you. But I know that having others makes it easier.
I felt like this, once.
I hope you find happiness and peace soon.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: I WAS SUPPOSED TO SMILE
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by msjroc on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:47:37 PM AEST
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You're speaking what so many of us feels and there is nothin anyone can tell u b/c everyone deals on their own time
Keep Your head to the sky
MS JRoc |
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