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Darkness
Contributed by
marshmalloska
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Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:44:29 AM in AEST
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And as you walk away
draw the darkness around you
like a cloak
Let it be your armour against
the spears of hate
they throw at your back
Let it be your protection against
the sting of the laughter
that echoes in their wake
Let is be the mask that stops
the tears of acid that threaten to
spill from you eyes
from falling onto your face
and burning a hole in your heart
Copyright ©
marshmalloska
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2005-01-28 09:44:29]
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Re: Darkness
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by Stitch on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:48:23 AM AEST
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You're missing an "r" in the third from the last line, but that's all. This is an excellent write.
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Re: Darkness
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by afterdark on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:41:34 AM AEST
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| It is good besides that one letter..I would have liked it a bit more tragic or dark but that is simply my taste..It was worded well and had great feel to it.. |
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Re: Darkness
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:32:23 PM AEST
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beautiful, lovely style and flow:) hugs n' love nessa
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