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her life
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 04:00:47 AM in AEST
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she sat at her computer one night and held her head in her hand
longing and empty in her heart for love but no one to understand
nothing to help her ease the pain that slowly kills her soul
she loved so much but was left without even a touch.
her arms wide open for someone to care
nothing much to love or love to share,
she can't help but long for understanding
and her loves are always ending
if just once she could be seen,
then her life would be understood,
but no one cares and no one shows
but in her life and heart
her love still grows
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2005-01-28 04:00:47]
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Re: her life
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by marshmalloska on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:47:47 AM AEST
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| No i thought this was an excellent poem, and a great idea- from someone elses perspective, i just hope that your not that sad really. it seems from browsing poems on this site, that depression is the curse of the intellectual |
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Re: her life
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by sojourner on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:10:06 AM AEST
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Nice poem, by your words written I can see that you have a heart that overflows with love
hope in time you find that one true love thats waiting to be found by you.
sojourner, |
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