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Cupid's Curse
Contributed by
Curtisc
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:58:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Love is something that everyone needs to feel,
there's nothing that can compare.
It's a feeling that's so surreal,
it can make the coldest heart care.
It brings to life so much more,
you awake ready to take on the day.
It's like nothing you've ever felt before,
and it doesn't come around everyday.
If you find love hold on tight,
and never lose your grip.
You'll know if you find it, it'll just feel right,
but don't let it slip.
Losing that love hurts beyond belief,
it just might be the worst pain.
No one should have to deal with all that grief,
it hurts more than words can explain.
Love is the greatest thing ever,
but when you lose it it's the worst.
That feeling is with you forever,
I like to call it Cupid's curse.
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Re: Cupid's Curse
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:13:19 AM AEST
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| Great poem, I relate a little so it makes it better. |
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Re: Cupid's Curse
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:14:20 AM AEST
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| It's a good poem. Keep writing! Cheers! |
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Re: Cupid's Curse
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by Raven on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:20:43 AM AEST
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| very good keep it up! |
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Re: Cupid's Curse
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 04:10:56 AM AEST
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| loved this poem... great write cupid sure can pull his pranks on ya |
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Re: Cupid's Curse
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:04:17 PM AEST
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well slap cupid upside the head and tell him to help you out some :):) .........
Did a great job with this poem and dont give up on your honey bun....... distance doesnt change heart affairs if its true
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Michelle |
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Re: Cupid's Curse
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 06:22:11 PM AEST
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u write well, as for love well i ain't no expert so i don't know, speaking 4 my self, loves neither good or bad, it's the expectation from love it self that sucks, as if the person we love is suppose 2 live up 2 those expectation and if they don't so much 4 love. nice writting and quite essential i may add . . .
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Re: Cupid's Curse
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:53:59 PM AEST
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| Great write. It's so lovely and true. Nice work. :-) |
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Re: Cupid's Curse
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by O7NeVeS on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:18:01 PM AEST
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| Great job once again!! I really liked this one, especially the last verse. TD |
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Re: Cupid's Curse
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:32:13 PM AEST
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This is really awesome.... lots of truth to it..
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Re: Cupid's Curse
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:02:25 AM AEST
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creatively clever:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Cupid's Curse
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 03:37:07 AM AEST
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it's a masterpeice. I like shelbys coment alot as when cupid started messing with I slapped the uhhu out of him and told him to leave me alone. See now i know what i was doing wrong. gonna try his advise and grab cupid and entice him to help me out. Jus maybe.
it's got the bitter sweets of luv. U need it but don't know hwere it is, then when u find it many times it slips thru your hands cause u never knew luv before and it scares the life out of u.
wow Jus can't get over the inspiring writes that touches my soul lately.
huggs, smiles,
luv, cupid's arrow,
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