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Desecrated
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:06:19 PM in AEST
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Desecrated
Perfect reflection
Shattered
Perfect example
Countered
Perfect life
Floundered
Everything wasted away
Desecrated
Nothing left to stay
Decimated
Only yourself to face
Without hate
With blame
Without pain
With shame
Perfection written into oblivion
With nothing worth remembering
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-01-27 23:06:19]
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Re: Desecrated
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:13:47 PM AEST
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Christ your amazing..This write was so strong with feeling it drives at you like a mack truck.
There is nothing about you though that should be forgotten.. |
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Re: Desecrated
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:59:42 PM AEST
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| You are more amazing with everthing you write that I read |
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Re: Desecrated
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:18:06 AM AEST
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| Interesting, although I cannot discern whether you are talking to yourself or someone else. NOT that it matters - this is very expressive of disdain. Good write! Cheers! |
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Re: Desecrated
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by venkat on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 05:17:56 AM AEST
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| Excellent wording.... "perfection written into oblivion...nothing worth remembering" amazingly wrapped. :-) venkat |
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