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Rage More
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:39:17 PM in AEST
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Rage More
Lose everything
Rage more
Nothing to take
Anymore
But everything to hate
Forever more
Feed the hunger
That burns
For loss of innocence
Unfilled for longer
Till there's nothing to discern
With lack of sense
Lie for truth
Because it wasn't enough
And lose yourself in darkness
With light unable to get through
Lose yourself in love
Rage more
Without what you want
Feed your hunger
To poison yourself
Lie for truth
Or cover it up
Just lose yourself
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2005-01-27 21:39:17]
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Re: Rage More
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:44:14 PM AEST
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| another great write. you just lose yourself when you write, dont you. ;) |
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Re: Rage More
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:44:57 PM AEST
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| My God you are amazing..Every aspect of this I loved..There is the best and then there is You. |
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Re: Rage More
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:20:20 PM AEST
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Great poem. I hope things get better for you.
Spazzo |
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Re: Rage More
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:28:07 AM AEST
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| Well *my* hunger has nothing to do with rage. :-) Still, this is really imaginatively expressed. Keep writing! Cheers! |
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Re: Rage More
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 05:48:55 AM AEST
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hey. that's my line. :P
it's awesome. struck all my angry and hurting chords.
rage more |
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Re: Rage More
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:06:30 AM AEST
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wow, there is a power behind these words, a frustration and loathing.
well expressed. |
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Re: Rage More
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:35:10 AM AEST
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Hmm it reminds of something but i dont know what.
It's a great poem i like the anger and rage you were saying in here.
Cool poem.
Jane x |
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