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I
Contributed by
poisonpen00ad
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:29:47 PM in AEST
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selfstruggles
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I am always walking away.
I don't even know my true name.
I don't know the truth.
I am afraid to ask questions.
I don't like to be lied to.
I feel a lot of pain.
I want to die sometimes.
I have nothing to give.
I have no joy in my life.
I don't understand.
I feel no remorse.
I can't help it.
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Re: I
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:48:48 PM AEST
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| Christ with that much depression and you have time to write a poem..Try cutting it may give you more to write about next. |
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Re: I
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:09:53 PM AEST
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| Sad write. Damn Afterdark I thought you were a kind brother, you disappoint me. You know the old saying if you can't say nothing nice, don't say nothing at all. It just might apply here. As to you poisonpen, get some professional help. Whatever you're going through, you will get past it. Much peace to you. |
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Re: I
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by cottoncandy on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 04:31:25 PM AEST
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dude i know what you mean...nicely written..keep your head up..writing it down helps a lot...
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Re: I
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 08:18:22 PM AEST
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all i can say about this writting, and granted it i'm no shrink, but you say u don't like being lied 2, ok . . . the fact u wrote this is cry 4 help, and i must say, i admire your honesty, no inuendos here, your
right 2 the point, now i'll be honest, go get some counseling, tell some one in private what your not
apparently ashamed 2 tell in public, as 4 remorse,
oh u care all right or u wouldn't be writting 2 begin
with . . . i wish u well . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: I
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by poisonpen00ad on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:34:16 AM AEST
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You people are taking this to serious. When I write I write to make people think about whats going on inside them and around them. Try reading some of my other stuff.
Thank you for the comments. |
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