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You Make My Spirit Soar
Contributed by
ArtisticGentleman
on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:27:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I am lying here, kind of lonesome and blue
And I think, I think about you
Oh, how you stir me! You stir my very soul!
Suddenly I am a wild stallion standing on a rocky knoll!
I see just below me on a far hillside
A beautiful creature so graceful and showing such pride
Her mane is the color of the sunset; it is blowing in the wind
Oh, how I could look at her! I could look at her till no end!
Suddenly my spirit is driven like an eagle in the sky
I spread my wings and I begin to fly
My spirit soars, it soars into space
For a fleeting moment, I can see you lovely face!
I’m in your arms, your soft breasts against my beating heart
Then all of a sudden, I realize we are hundreds of miles apart!
I fold my wings and down I begin to soar
Down, down to the earth I had left just moments before
I am back on the hillside, oh, such haste
I look again but I can’t see your lovely face
I view the hillside but the creature is not there
And I wonder was that beautiful creature you or just a mare?
Your smile, your sweet voice, oh, how they beckon me!
Was it just a dream or was it love that is yet to be?
I have a life of sensuous passion to share
With such desire only the reckless would dare.
I ask God’s blessing on our love both day and night,
Till the end of life, until we see the heavenly sight.
You are far away in Kentucky with a heart full of love
Quiet, I say! Do I hear the cooing of a dove?
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2005-01-27 21:27:27]
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Re: You Make My Spirit Soar
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by Raven on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:12:54 PM AEST
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| nice i loved it. Especially like the reference to Kentucky at the end. |
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Re: You Make My Spirit Soar
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:31:17 AM AEST
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| This was very sweet. Good luck with your dream. Cheers! |
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Re: You Make My Spirit Soar
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 03:56:57 PM AEST
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Well done...loved this... the rhyme scheme is good..
Jenni |
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