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One Day Without You
Contributed by
poisonpen00ad
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:45:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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One day without you is too much.
My soul screams longing for your touch.
Darkness overtakes me when you are not near.
Sadness and torment reinforced by fear.
As you come close the darkness turns to light.
Angels bow down just from the sight.
All fears and worry are now all gone.
One day without you is much too long
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poisonpen00ad
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2005-01-27 20:45:33]
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Re: One Day Without You
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by Renstar on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:49:33 PM AEST
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| good write i really liked it :>) |
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Re: One Day Without You
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:11:38 PM AEST
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| I like it... for a number of reasons... the most obvious being that I can relate... Just ask my girlfriend... |
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Re: One Day Without You
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by CurtisC on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:14:20 PM AEST
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excellent write, I really enjoyed it :)
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Re: One Day Without You
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:19:00 PM AEST
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| Short and sweet. Great write. Much peace. |
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Re: One Day Without You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:38:40 AM AEST
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| This was a sweet write. Cheers! |
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