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*Endless Tears *
Contributed by
Sarah22
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Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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i can' t stop crying
endless tears because
babe i cant get over you.
Copyright ©
Sarah22
... [
2002-12-07 09:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: *Endless Tears *
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 04:46:15 PM AEST
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very short but very touching , it made me cry as well endless tears, it has such deep meaning in it , i cant explain but it filled my mind , ur poem, its the best poem i probably read on this site , should be number one no doubt , especially that u worked hard on it , i bet it took u a quite long time to write this, maybe days and nights ,but in the end u have a master peace here , plz plz keep them coming , i cant thank u enough 4 this poem , i wish if i made it so that i 'll be the one honored to own it .
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Re: *Endless Tears *
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by Elisabeth on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 08:36:00 PM AEST
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| What an anonymous jerk! Some people just don't understand literature, much less poetry. If we find out who this heartless wimp is, he/she should be banned from this site. This was a short poem, hence haiku. Don't let someone else's comments effect you one way or another. Write for yourself, and YES experiment with various styles, as well as your own. I liked your poem, and even that doesn't matter. I hope your heart heals soon. |
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Re: *Endless Tears *
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 01:16:21 AM AEST
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This is good Sarah... but for future reference.... a haiku is 5 syllable line, 7 syllable line, 5 syllable line.
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Re: *Endless Tears *
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by gina on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 05:50:45 AM AEST
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oh , how touchin indeed , i like haiku poems.
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Re: *Endless Tears *
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 03:32:10 PM AEST
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Since Haikus are short they are very hard to get your message across and harder to still to get a meaningful message across. This is very beautifully written and I think it is 5,5,7 syllable line. In any case its a great write.
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