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Jack of Hearts
Contributed by
raven
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 07:32:01 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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When we die our heart stops beating. Well now mine has stopped and your''s beats twice as fast. Almost a year, the all we have been through must be less than you think. Now seven is a number i regret. Do you know what this has done...?
This is why i dread it. Like a card, you have two faces. Look in the mirror and reflect on your vision. What you see as your chance is dying with the other, when you gaze again look for the shooting one because thats your opportunity leaving.
This must have a happy ending or reason. For it i would give all my dollers and you have to change. It''s not choosing straws. Give the happy ending, I feel for you...
-Inspired by someone dear to me-
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Re: Jack of Hearts
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:13:20 PM AEST
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| Another one by you I really am fond of..You have a good knack here with your poetry. |
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Re: Jack of Hearts
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:00:24 AM AEST
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| Intriguing, almost cryptic. I feel there are symbols here only known to you and your other. Best of luck and Keep writing! Cheers! |
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