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Sadistic Romance Part IV- Give Up

Contributed by EternalNight4x on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:26:47 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Hey eyes they burned with vivid fear
Down her cheek rolled a single tear
Her naked body plunged to the ground
From her wound blood spilt around

Clasped in his hands was a frigid blade
Stained with the blood from the wound it made
Her skin turned ashen, colored drained from her eyes
She had not the energy left to cry

Her head felt light
Sucked into the night
‘tis pointless to fight
Nothing’s alright

She longed to hurt him and cause him torment
Yet he merely smiled at her feeble attempt
Losing all hope she slipped away
And prayed she wouldn’t awake the next day

She had no such luck, death was not his intent
To cause bitter pain was what he had meant
So at the end of the day she would fade away
Only to await more suffering the next day

Copyright Â© EternalNight4x ... [ 2005-01-27 16:26:47]
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Re: Sadistic Romance Part IV- Give Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 04:16:48 AM AEST
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i cant believe this.
Your work!
We have the exact style.
Vocab.
Wow.
Separated at birth, you and I?

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