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untitled
Contributed by
waitingintheshadows
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:37:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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the night falls with a silent sigh, fearful are we.
the god for which you pray
flares once, then dies,
devoured by the all-encompassing dark.
all hope must sicken and die.
your heart desires no more.
how could you abandon me?
shadows surround us, crying,
we have lost our way.
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waitingintheshadows
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2005-01-27 15:37:52]
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Re: untitled
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by tres_estrellas on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 02:58:05 AM AEST
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| nice expression of emotion. I think I know how you feel. |
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Re: untitled
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by PuppyChow on
Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 10:01:49 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem. it really speaks out, i like the choice of words. it really has feeling to it. keep it up!! |
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Re: untitled
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 12:18:46 PM AEST
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Great poem.. Indeed dark..
take care
christina |
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