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Next to me
Contributed by
Rain_Dancer
on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:36:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As you lay here,
Next to me,
I find it very hard,
To barely breath,
As I lay here,
As I lie,
I am never,
Going to surrender to die,
As I lie here on this Earth,
I wonder when I will give birth,
As you lay here next to me,
I see that I can finally breath...
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Re: Next to me
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:14:06 PM AEST (User
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A good post for pondering..It is soemthing I am sure many think of..Your style was good and the subject was more original then most here. |
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