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So it's true
Contributed by
lovingkk05
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 01:54:37 PM in AEST
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So I've heard the stories and it seems,
My dreams weren't what thy were meant to be.
But for once I can say that I am ok,
I will find my true love for me one day.
It's hard to believe on how easy I let go,
I usually I fight it and always say no.
I guess it was the right thing to do,
To let it go and be happy for you.
But you see I don't if thats right,
To say that I am happy when it might be a lie.
Right now I am still somewhat confused,
Lost and broken with nothing to do
So here I sit all down hearted,
Right back from where I started.
But I do wish you the best in all that you do,
And I'm glad that you found one to love you.
For some reason I feel like I've done something wrong,
But know that I still love you Shaun.
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Re: So it's true
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by nightwolf on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 02:05:03 PM AEST
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| beautiful. great use of emotion, good wording, very good poem |
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Re: So it's true
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by jillian_phan on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:24:48 PM AEST
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Look for one i know how u feel, sad but true,
i am not going to compare myself to you nor you to i, but my comments will be as so
All men are ***** all men are dogs.... j/k
but no seriously like we all are humans - animals - with carnal knowledge, we care and nothing can make someone change the way they care but the person they care about. and in the same sense, people will do what is right, even if it makes someone happy, sad or ***** off. the thing is people also need to take up a chance and cannot let it go, this is probably really confusing.... but i'm trying to explain that love life and the etc are to make you happy and if you are not then do not worry, i'm better at these type of things when i am familiar with the situation, i am very good at making sense if you are confused but i don't want to confuse you if your not.... so if your want you could write back to my box ... in case you want a person's input that don't know you and can't judge who u are... |
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