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~An Illusion~

Contributed by only4das on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 01:46:04 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I guess u needed me when u were all alone…
I guess it was easy then to say how much love me so…
I guess u thought it would help u get through all the tough times
I guess it was nice to know u had someone on your side…

It must have been nice to have it all just for u…
I guess it helped get by all those lonely night blues…
I guess sharing your bad days and complaints must have been great…
I guess it was nice, no commitment, all u had to do was communicate…
It’s so wonderful to know that I could accommodate you in your time of need…
That’s what it was right? A convience that’s just how u saw me…

I can’t believe I was that big of a fool
To fall in love with the likes of u…
But it isn’t your fault I fell so deeply in love with your eyes…
The kisses u blew to me; the smiles put me in paradise…
But it wasn’t a paradise …just an oasis in the midst of a desert…
An illusion and I fell for it…now I know I deserve this hurt…

How could I have been so blind as to not see…?
This was a just a game u wanted to play with me…
This game that u played, I hope u had fun…
Breaking my heart; down my cheeks the tears now run…

I guess I’m the biggest fool to have ever lived…
To love a man who never really did exist…

Copyright Â© only4das ... [ 2005-01-27 13:46:04]
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Re: ~An Illusion~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:06:13 PM AEST
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Great write! I can definately relate. Nice work.

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