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Shattered Dreams
Contributed by
apcfan
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:07:50 AM in AEST
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My dreams are shattered
My life is empty
They took my dreams away
Ripped them out of my heart
Now Im left with this void
This void that will never be filled again
They want me to be lonely
They want me to be depressed
They want me to be hated
They want me to die
No one cares that Im alone
No one cares if Im miserable
No one cares if I die
They had to take her away from me
They told me that its for the best
They took her away from me
Now my heart is shattered
No one can glue my heart together again
Because once its broken it cant be mend
They shattered my dreams
When they told me she doesnt exist
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2005-01-27 11:07:50]
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Re: Shattered Dreams
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by jjones12 on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:12:04 AM AEST
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nice write.....
=Jen=
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Re: Shattered Dreams
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by TaintedSoul on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:43:18 AM AEST
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Okay this deserves a great big *HUGZ* The emotional pain is so very strong here.
peace
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Re: Shattered Dreams
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by Stalkee on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 01:39:51 PM AEST
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wow this is so sad, but a very well written poem...
"They took my dreams away
Ripped them out of my heart
Now Im left with this void
This void that will never be filled again"
I think that was my favorite bit of this :) |
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