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Daydream
Contributed by
Dyann
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 07:16:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I want you to know that I’m always thinking of you,
No matter where I am or what I do.
I always imagine that you are here with me,
Watching the sunset together in the shore of the sea.
However, all I can do is imagine and dream,
Hoping that you’ll be standing at the end of the stream.
It hurts inside every time that I that I see you,
‘Cause I don’t have the guts to do what I want to do.
In my heart I know that we’ll be a great team,
But for now, all I can do is daydream.
Copyright ©
Dyann
... [
2005-01-27 07:16:19]
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Re: Daydream
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by craz2 on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:11:21 AM AEST
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| thanks for putting this into words. I will share with my daydream. maybe one day our hearts will be filled with the ocean shore. thanks keep writing. a |
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Re: Daydream
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by Dri on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:17:26 PM AEST
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| this is really earnest, the flow is a little choppy, but other than that, very well done |
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Re: Daydream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 12:29:12 AM AEST
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| Hey, I can really really Relate !! I really enjoyed reading this poem !! this is very great.. short but hey... short poems can be emotional to ^_^ ~ |
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