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Easy Street
Contributed by
Crow
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 05:07:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Here you are on easy street
everyone holding their breath
wondering if the pain subsided
if you left it all behind.
Silly isn`t it the masks
we wear trying fit right-in
stand before your conscious mirror
asking yourself the coming questions
to see how you react.
Fool them all for just a minute
a minute is all you will give
glass eyes stare back in the mirror
but you haven`t stopped the bleeding yet.
Here you are on easy street
you think you could settle right-down
another`s presence, more doors unbolting
keep you on the edge of your chair.
Murky waters, won`t stir quite clear
the past and present survive.
All your riches have kept you starving,
trying to get to the light...Lane
© Copyright 2004
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Crow
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2005-01-27 05:07:45]
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Re: Easy Street
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by Row on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 05:15:59 AM AEST
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| yeah its some good work, im not really liking the whole suicide thing an all, but hey, ur life man |
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Re: Easy Street
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by Crow on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 05:21:55 AM AEST
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Hold-it...noth`in like that! sorry, just slang for cutting loose!
thanks for the kind word...Lane |
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Re: Easy Street
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 05:39:59 AM AEST
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Well I'm happy u not gonna shoot yourself.
You conveinced me.
Good writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Easy Street
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 05:47:12 AM AEST
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one wrong word and everyone thinks you're gonna put a bullet in your head...lol
All your riches have kept you starving...great line, great write.
Barkeep! keep my friend in drinks til he's laughing
Larry |
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Re: Easy Street
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by Crow on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:44:32 AM AEST
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Damn! might be a couple offer to line it up, and hold it steady! I got to stop all that gutter talk! if I said bust loose" there would be a flood of 911 calls! thank you for reading me,
all of you. just a few more you have to put up with; I`m not done yet! Lane |
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Re: Easy Street
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by shelby on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:34:40 PM AEST
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mmmm had me worried for a second but I thought I knew you better than that:) wise are the words
Michelle |
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