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This Is You
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:25:38 AM in AEST
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Someone like you
Deserves the best
The best guy to treat you right
The best of friends to call late at night
The best job that pays well
So you are stuck working so hard
You need more time
To take care of yourself
Take time off of work
And clear your mind
Don't dwell on the past
But look up ahead
And that is where you will see
People who care
They aren't there for them
They are there for you
To support your decisions
And help you get through
All your struggles and problems
Great ideas and accomplishments
They will be with you every step of the way
You are pretty on the inside and out
A brilliant mind with talent so great
You share with the world
Your mind, heart, and soul
Anyone who would dislike you
Would be a fool
If I had to describe you
This is what I would say
You clearly fit the description
In every single way
Of course you might be blushing
Or laughing out loud
But doesn't your talent
Make you proud
This is what you
Are all about
So go enjoy life
Have some fun
Remember you are number one
Throw a party
Go out dancing
Drink all night
Later when you're in the future
Look back on the day when you set yourself free
Partied, danced, and drank all in the same night
And maybe you will realize
It helps you be more relaxed
Copyright ©
UnlovedChild
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2005-01-27 03:25:38]
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Re: This Is You
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:02:01 AM AEST
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| what a great friend you are to write such a great poem to your friend.well done. |
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Re: This Is You
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:04:19 AM AEST
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| great job.. |
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Re: This Is You
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:06:57 AM AEST
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Amy, this is just beautiful and sweet. You're freind is so lucky to have you.
And yes it's time to party girl.
Good write Amy im proud of you for writing this wonderfull poem.
Jane x |
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Re: This Is You
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:59:59 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: This Is You
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 07:00:03 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: This Is You
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by Rxqueen on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:57:19 AM AEST
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| I really liked this one girl, you are becoming quite the writer! |
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Re: This Is You
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:06:45 AM AEST
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Awww, this is so sweet Amy. Your friend is very lucky to have you.
We are very lucky to have you here at YPDC too.
Always keep writing. K?
*hugs tons* Phil xxx
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