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What I Hate
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 02:34:04 AM in AEST
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I hate it when
People blame you
When it isn''t your fault
When you have to pee so badly
But don''t feel like getting up
When others try to doubt you
And say it can''t be done
That you are no one
And that you will fail
When people think they''re better than you
When really we are all the same
Or when someone acts like someone else
To make another happy
When you always seem to know how to solve other''s problems
But never your own
When you are forced to go somewhere
Or do something you really don''t want to do
When people fight
And pull you in
Then make you choose sides
When you have to work
To support yourself
And never have time for vacation
When people are lonely
But deny it
And when others clearly seems sad
But they lie and say they''re fine
The thing I hate the most though
Is when people have to die
And you don''t get to say
I love you
Or goodbye
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UnlovedChild
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2005-01-27 02:34:04]
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Re: What I Hate
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:26:07 AM AEST
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Amy this is another sad beautiful write, i love how your work gets better and better.
Love this piece.
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Re: What I Hate
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:11:15 AM AEST
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| I have to pee right now and don't want to leave my computer LOL..loved this work.. |
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Re: What I Hate
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 07:13:14 AM AEST
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Great write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: What I Hate
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:10:18 PM AEST
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| im very impressed. |
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