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glitter flakes on pillow cases
Contributed by
rxqueen
on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 01:48:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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He says it all the time
smiles then changes the subject
its ok to love me
its ok to catch your breath once in a while...
take a moment
breathe baby:
Did you know this is how life would be on those nights we went to the movies
we sat and ate popcorn and waited for the previews to hurry up and end
get to the feature presentation please
hurry
but why
why rush time?
we were in our prelude
life had not begun as we know it now
we were stuck in the previews
and now we are amidst the climax
happy ending?
not always...
we shall not know till the credits roll
till the popcorns gone
till we shuffle out of the theatre in a daze
the light will hit our eyes
groggy
foggy
another night over
we cannot buy the dvd
we can only have it this once
nothing more to see
take your time with your time
for it flies by so fast
nothing is forever
movies never last...
"I wish I knew that movie star"
I want to be your fantasy
sit there and devour me
want and yearn for an autograph
hang a poster above your bed
make me that beauty on your screen
naked.
breath taking.
awestruck you stare
but do you fail now to see?
she is but a scripted part
sitting next to you is reality
it is here you may rest your heart
Do not forgo raw beauty
for fairytales and dreams
the movies almost over
even the smoothest surface has seems
and stars like everything fade away
glittler flakes on pillow cases
she becomes one of many faces
her makeup will wear off tonight
but it will be me in your arms at daylight
do not get caught in the limelight.
Copyright ©
rxqueen
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2005-01-27 01:48:12]
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Re: glitter flakes on pillow cases
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by UnlovedChild on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 02:39:45 AM AEST
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| Hey sweet one! This is really good, I love it just like I love all of your poems. It's so touching, some parts romantic lol. I like how you put it all together. Excellent job! |
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Re: glitter flakes on pillow cases
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:38:33 AM AEST
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Wow the message of the poem was powerfull.
Great write Jocelyn and im sure a lot of us here can relate to this wonderful sad romantic write.
Jane x |
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Re: glitter flakes on pillow cases
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:56:39 AM AEST
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| very powerfull. |
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Re: glitter flakes on pillow cases
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 02:47:58 PM AEST
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I really liked this poem..
glittler flakes on pillow cases
she becomes one of many faces
her makeup will wear off tonight
but it will be me in your arms at daylight
That stanza is very amazing..You hit a good note with this one. |
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Re: glitter flakes on pillow cases
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:32:50 PM AEST
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| Great analogy!! I think he'll get the point |
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Re: glitter flakes on pillow cases
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:14:41 PM AEST
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Amazing and wonderful and true write.
Spazzo |
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Re: glitter flakes on pillow cases
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:35:44 PM AEST
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| This took my breath away.. |
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