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Soul
Contributed by
sojourner
on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:38:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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The earth was void
before I was
The sea, is calm within
A storm is brewing
I'm cast adrift
Before me lie
a brave new world
I open my eyes
To a thousand, thousand
stars
Copyright ©
sojourner
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2005-01-26 23:38:08]
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Re: Soul
(User Rating: 1 )
by blueyes11 on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:41:58 PM AEST
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| i love that you just wrote down what was floating around in your head! very intriguing... makes me want to spend a day inside your brain to see what other interesting things are brewing! lol |
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Re: Soul
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 01:31:26 AM AEST
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A heavenly beautifull masterpeice.
huggs, smiles,
emystar |
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Re: Soul
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:50:18 AM AEST
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| Beautiful ending. It all came together so well. |
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